Ambika Jois

debsyx
Fri Dec 25 01:02:52 2009

kalikat
Fri Dec 25 01:02:54 2009

ptrc2
Fri Dec 25 01:02:58 2009

tretti
Fri Dec 25 01:02:59 2009

pinklillys
Fri Dec 25 01:02:56 2009

cordeliafellowes
Fri Dec 25 01:02:51 2009

WATCH OUT this woman does NOT have any intention to work with other musicians, she is only lying for getting votes.
giftofvision

Beautiful voice
zemmy

wicked singing!
micklee

good stuff
meganthedog

Hi. Thanks so much for your comment and vote. I really love your song and voice too. Would def like to collaborate some time. Do you have a myspace/website?
michaelhyman

A great song, positive lyrics, hooky melody, sang beautifully and the musical composition is brilliant. The piano solo, along with the acoustic guitars are captivating.

I like the simplicity of your vocals ..lovely. Nice tone, powerful and extensive vocal range. This is a great song, a sure fire hit, warm and to the point melodically and musically.

Keep working on your chorus hooks and strengthening your voice. You have the ingredients of being a wonderful singer. I can hear you singing great Folk/Ambient/Jazz/Soul music!

22/30
valeriemaxfield

I always think some of the greatest songwriters that have ever lived get their message across in under 3mins so that should be your target. Unfortnately I really didn’t like the lyrics on this. They were a bit trite and distracted you from the music. It was also quite a rambling song. Could benefit from some serious editing.

There were some interesting ideas, not least the instrumental section and the instrumentation in general, but it could have benefited from a seriously tight arrangement and a sense of development. It was very much on one level throughout. Think about the overall shape of the song and the need for peaks, troughs, quiet, loud, etc etc. It needs to feel like a journey. That’s the job of a (good) producer.

The idea of mixing the Indian and Western musical traditions is a great one – keep pushing that. I don’t think that comes across in the music enough yet.

14/30
tomlewis

Unfortunately the lyrics were not inspiring and I felt it was a rather harsh vocal tone. My advice would be to take some extra singing lessons to improve your vocal tone and try to write some more universal, inspiring lyrics.

13/30
mickglossop

I thought this was fairly safe and unadventurous… Lyrically the song was enjoyable, but the vocals were w little undisciplined and lack commitment and the production is pretty weak.

There seemed to be lots of different sections that were clumsily put together. Try and make your pieces more “organic” and held homogenous. Some Backing Vocals or harmony would have helped I think.

13/30
haydnbendall