Danny Leigh

Guest Judge Comments on:
Danny Leigh's
No more running around

3 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
Some more words would have been welcome! Far too many repeated lines and na,na,na. This song is not really finished.

3 point(s) for Performance
The performance is pretty weak and only just carries the song. Too many mistakes and out of tune notes - was that the jazz bit?

3 point(s) for Capture
Horrible recording that detracted even more from the performance and song. Recordings don't have to be perfect but they should give a sense of place and atmosphere.


9 Total Points
Set your sights much higher. You have a strong, rich voice and there are brief moments in the song that promise better things.


tonyplatt
Sun Dec 27 12:14:36 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
Danny Leigh's
No more running around

5 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
The song is pretty good lyrically and musically! A little cliched but well done.

3 point(s) for Performance
Nothing special here. The vocals grate after a while, a little to lazy to pull off a lazy track...

2 point(s) for Capture
The guitar's little too bright and voice not really airy enough for my tastes. The Bv is much too high in relation and is odd just hanging around in the right speaker. The Hum is pretty annoying too. Theres lofi 'cool' and just lofi...


10 Total Points


emreramazanoglu
Sun Dec 27 12:14:33 2009