Queens English

Guest Judge Comments on:
Queens English's
Full Limit ft. Embee of Looptroop & Mr Chips

3 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
Pretty unusual to have the piano alongside this kind of gear ! Nice !

2 point(s) for Performance
Not bad at all but a little GEEZAH GEEZER for me !

4 point(s) for Capture
Tight, bouncey and clean


9 Total Points


jonkennedy
Fri Dec 25 03:16:45 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
Queens English's
Full Limit ft. Embee of Looptroop & Mr Chips

6 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
There are some good ideas here lyrically. Wordplay and and things like the "extra extra" work well although some of the words are lost through lack of clear delivery.

6 point(s) for Performance
The MCs and singers are all clearly talented and the interplay between the two is one of the aspects of the track I like best.

Some of the lyrics are a little worn and verging on stereotypical especially in the chorus and certain verse lines.

4 point(s) for Capture
The production is one aspect of this track that I feel really let it down. While the beat is nice enough and fairly energetic there is muffled feel to the over all track both musically and lyrically that lessens it's possible impact.


16 Total Points
There is definitely a very strong basis to work from here with a nice soulful and fun vibe to the act and the track. Just need a little more imagination and clarity.


spindoctor
Fri Dec 25 03:16:51 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
Queens English's
Full Limit ft. Embee of Looptroop & Mr Chips

8 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
nice use of instruments, maybe sounds a bit busy in the background... lot of sounds, just needs unity & clarity

not sure how well the piano fits

good energy though

8 point(s) for Performance
nice flow, could maybe use more of hook & female vocals

verse at 2'30 is good - maybe go for more flows like this...

8 point(s) for Capture
slighty busy in parts but otherwise v. good.


24 Total Points
just make more of the hook & chorus - this is the part that listeners latch on to & remember, so worth exploiting...

lacking a slight bit of originality


alexkenning
Fri Dec 25 03:16:43 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
Queens English's
Full Limit ft. Embee of Looptroop & Mr Chips

8 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
nice, these dudes have come a long way..
Lyrics sounding good,

chorus sunds a bit keen, but the singin comes in nice and evens it all out.. flowas are very nice tho, and good multi syllable flipping that retains th emeaning in the lyrics

Sounding like no one else, got their thing going on now!

8 point(s) for Performance
rapping is very tight,
not pretentious at all

nice to see these guys pushing the artform and skills further without selling out

9 point(s) for Capture
production rules! big fan of embee.

Recording is nice


25 Total Points
these guys have defo found themselves and come a long way from their early efforts.


Keep it up..

a tad more swagger, litlle bit less backpak and it's ooon!


orificevulgatron
Fri Dec 25 03:16:48 2009